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January 18, 2013
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:PC: Virus Desktop Background (Please Critic) by ZisaBlade :PC: Virus Desktop Background (Please Critic) by ZisaBlade
WHEW. This took about 2 days to finish :iconfacepaw:

and then Zisa did too much realism for a little amount :icondoublefacepaw:

Oh well, it's art. :aww:

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Okay, To start off, Lets start with the ears, The ears are heaps to big, Try drawing them a little smaller, And maybe a little bit more ear fluff, c:

And the paw that is stretching outwards, // The left one, // I can see that she is like stretching her paws out, xD But her right paw // The furthest one // Might be a little to far by her side, when a cat sits, It dosn't put its paw like, Really close to the side of its leg, When a cat sits the paws are normaly infront of them, xD If I explained that correctly, xD

And I see that you have shading, But the shading is a little to soft, Unless it is suppose to be like that, BUT if you are using a layered program, And you used the color black for the characters pelt, Get a darkish red, and shade with red, Then multiply it, and lower the opacity, C:

Then add some highlights with a ligher color, Like Orange/Yellow, Or a good highlighting color, :3

Hopely this helped and keep it up! :)
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You did a great job on this! And I have to say first and foremost, I don't critique often but i'll do my best.

Alright, so I think the first thing I notice is the scarf. It seems unnatural in the way it sweeps to the side and it should maybe be longer. The left hind leg should maybe have a less sharp shape, and the tail should be a little less thick. The ears seem over-sized and it makes her look more like a mouse

As for the backround, one or two more clouds could have been added, and they could have taken a more random shape. But I like it very much overall! c:

Virus's eyes seem to be great, but you should aim them more to the viewer in my opinion for a better perspective. The grass in the backround is very well done in my opinion and I like how you did Virus's paws, they look cute x3

Anyway, thats all I can see for flaws/strongpoints I hope I did decent i'm sorry if I didn't ;w;
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CaptainRedJWolf Jan 19, 2013   Digital Artist
I love teh backgroundddd! It like has that just chillin' feel to itttt. And I like how it blends in with the character~
ZisaBlade Jan 19, 2013  Student Artist
Thank you u wu~

Clouds look un-realistic, though o uo;;
CaptainRedJWolf Jan 19, 2013   Digital Artist
Whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat No. The clouds look very realistic >U Look [link]
Deadly-Meow Jan 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
oh my gosh this ;o;
its so... so amazing <33 thank you so much! i just love it so much omfg
i go pay now :'D
ZisaBlade Jan 18, 2013  Student Artist
You're welcome

@_@ Realism ASDFASD
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